Sometimes, only reading out my essay loud to other people helps revising by myself. When I was reading my essay to Ms. Swift, I could recognize and remove some unnecessary sentences that I didn't recognize before. Also, I could make sure about some words that I used but wasn't sure if that word is what I'm trying to express or not. For example, I used the word tomboy to express new characteristic of Juliet which is little bit wilder, more childish and louder than Juliet's real characteristic. I wasn't sure about the word because I've never heard or used it before I found out. However, by Ms. Swift's help, I could confirm some of uncertain words that I used first time.
I knew the writing center from the beginning of the school, but I didn't visit frequently even though I knew that I'm a student who needs a lot of hep from the writing center. I was being lazy and wasn't confident enough to show my poor writing work to someone. However, through this helpful visit, I realized that I could develop my writing works more clear and stable by receiving help from the writing center and there is no reason to be shy to show my work to others. If I keep visit writing center and get feedback and advice for my future writing assignments, then I believe that my grade will jump up from B- to B+.

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